The lighting looks great, the angle on the face could use some work though. The forehead seems a bit too large. I'm sure you can make someone look good from this angle, keep up the good work!
A world of thank you for taking time and pointing out the forehead. My brain simply refused to see what was wrong although I knew something looked wonky. I think I fixed the worst of it, unfortunately something is still 'meh' but I just can't see what. Eff it, I'll improve one day.
Man, you have no idea how much actually pointing stuff out helps... THANK YOU. Again.
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