Very cute rendition of these two. You're very good at drawing long flowing hair. c:
If I may, I think this image might look a bit better if you moved the girls toward the center a bit more. Compositionally, I feel like they're a bit off-center because of Usagi's hair. Wouldn't hurt to nudge them up and to the left a little so that they're a stronger point of focus. It's not super necessary though. Still looks good!
Which brushes did you use to colour their clothing btw? I like the textured look it gives off.
Keep up the great work! Looking forward to seeing more of these, if you're still planning to do them!
Thank you very much for the nice feedback. :D
For the coloration of the clothes, I uses the simple watercolor brush from Manga Studio with a very sensitive setting and dotted the colors onto the drawing. So I didn't use anything special, just a weird drawing technique.
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