Guess it's a good thing this is only a 40k/ish/ Marine, as I'm pretty sure normal Marines in 40k look a lot sturdier; I'd say maybe in the future, if you want a more 40k look, don't slope your pauldrons down. They should jut out proudly to the sides; these somehow look weaker than the ones that're found on standard WH40k Marine armor. Also, I can't think of any WH40k Marine that doesn't have at least a sword/massive firearm AND has thrusters that look like that. Still a good try, overall!
Yeah like in my author comments I also thought the armor looked odd/wonky. elongated midsection short small arms and shoulder pads that were not parallel to the actual shoulders but were pointing down. Thanks for the review ;)
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