I miss some kind of background, otherwise I like it.
Sure, it's a pencil draw, some may not like this, but I'm a bit old-fashioned sometimes and these drawings remind me of the past, when you have to draw your entire comic on some sheets of paper and copy then to let your friends see them - thx to the internet, that's not longer necessary ;)
The character facts you wrote in the comments help us, too. We get a better insight of your work and the entire storyline. Keep it up, mate!