sweet man thats really good
Okay, but needs some work.
I really like the way you did the hair. It really looks like it has some body to it, which is a pitfall that a lot of beginning artists fall into when they try to draw manga.
The gradient in the eye is also nice, as well.
However, you need to work on your facial proportions. You should be able to see a little bit more of her face on the left side. The face in your drawing seems to just stop abruptly. Also, your eyes need perspective, as well.
Take a look at this tutorial. There's a lot to read through, but find the section about eyes and faces. The way you draw eyes changes with the perspective of the face.
Lastly, you need to put some shading on the neck. To get a hang on this, I suggest you look up some anatomy tutorials. Learn the location and proportion of the muscles in the human body are and then work on your shading from there.
Overall, it looks like you have potential, you just need to practice.
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