getting better...

athough i feel that her arm is still to bulky... her head a tiny bit to big... and has crazy hair... its a real big improvement from the other female drawings tou have been doing... love the use of lighting with the greens and blues... the linework still needs work as i said but looking 100% better then the last try! :3... keep it up!

well XD

if it was 3:00 in the morning after working all day, tired as hell and bored. i think its ok =)

This just reeks mediocre

The thrown in line on the ear, the false knowledge of anatomy, the forced light sources and their effect on the skin that doesn't make sense. Why's her boob about 2 cm away from her chin? There's no depth, what's that massively thick outline doing there? Her eyes are waaaay too far up and waaaay too big. If you're gunna try pull off a stylized look you need a grasp of what things look like in the first place. And practice shading, this picture just doesn't make sense.

It's not a bad picture, it just seems so forced. I've seen you in the forums, I'm sure you can take what I've said and apply it to your work, don't be offended, just keep practicing. And spend more time on your stuff, K? K.

Seriously, what's up with her boobs?