I would only put heavy black lines in the wrinkled-skin areas such as the crotch and where her arm meets her hip. When you put heavy black outlines around things such as her niples and her hair, it looks as if you pasted them on. Other than that, this is a fantastic peice of art and you do have some true talent.
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