It's lacking
Feels devoid of everything, and not in a complementary way. It needs a background most importantly, but I feel that it's not a complete story, as if the characters are just there. The dance they are doing is almost there.
It's lacking
Feels devoid of everything, and not in a complementary way. It needs a background most importantly, but I feel that it's not a complete story, as if the characters are just there. The dance they are doing is almost there.
yeah i know lol. it was just a random thing ya know. im still working on it i just posted to see if it was wort finishing.
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