The lighting and water are nicely done...
That girl is in for a heart attack when she turns around. I would probably die if I turned around to come face to face with the monster of all monsters.
You could always attempt pulling an Eric Cartman and befriend the monster of all monsters. Looney Toons style.
I think Cthulu is behind you.
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