I think this would have been perfect if not for the fact that it looks a bit too grainy. I know that was intentional. I still love this. I am always becoming more familiar with Warhammer 40K. They just have the most triumphant examples of tropes out there. The lighting effects are done wonderfully here. You get to see these distinctly different figures.
Its variance like that, which makes a good picture. It almost seems like you were trying to imitate a stained glass window. I thought it worked out great for you. Even the stuff raining down on them has uniqueness. A very nice picture as always.