You have random flecks of lines all over your canvas, color weaving in and out of your character lines and sloppy line work. You need to try harder to make cleaner looking work if you want anybody to notice or take your work seriously. Its a shame because I see potential here and I dont understand why you would be bothered to color your work at all like this as it would probably look neater without such sloppy colors hastily added to it.
Thanks for the critique man i appreciate it, i always welcome constructive criticism, as long as it's "constructive" lol. If you notice or ever went through my gallery i've never really been to confident about my line/color work, its something i've always had a problem with, but i still challenge myself to get better with pieces like this even though it looks half assed lol. You're right though i need to take more pride in more work, slow down, and make it as neat as i possible can, so people can take it a little more seriously. But do understand im still experimenting/learning on this artistic endeavor of mine and i always try to give 110%.
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