It's okay ... , but the anatomy is off, the chin is too far off to the left, one of her eyes is too small, her eyes should be in the center of her face (and not on her forehead). Also her neck should have an angle to it, since the human spine curves.
On the good side the hair looks pretty detailed, the colors match, and the shading on the eyes are really good.
I suggest you check out some art tutorials and practice drawing photos of people. Heck even take some classes.
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