I really like this new style you experimenting with, I would love to see how loose you can get.
Its very open. it can be interpreted in quiet a few ways. like dark thoughts, evil thoughts...or maybe somethings in his life eating away at him, scrambling his thoughts into a mess of black uncertainty. And some of the black leaking outta the outline of the thought bubble, symbolizing this darkness slipping out and effecting his personal life. but i could just be nuking it. i like it. strangely interesting! nice. still a tad bit plain though, so sadly i give 4 and a half stars.
that looks so awesome!!
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