For the most part I think this one looks good too. But my eye is always drawn to where her mouth should be. I think her bottom lip should be visible, maybe even the top lip too. It looks a little in-human.
Aside from that I think it's good. I like how the hand and ring is in focus the the rest is sort of blurry.
Thanks! Yeah one could debate wether or not the lower lip should be visible, now as you mention it, yes, it might be, but it would be so cropped clunky that I don't think it would work. Thus bit longer jaw. Thanks mate!