Obviously you're an artist.
Obviously you can draw well.
But from the perspective of a thinker, your art is lacking.
Artist don't simply draw or paint random scribbles with no flow or organization. You have the ability, you just need to make your art more dynamic; more powerful. Make it stand out.
In this picture of a crow, I don't really feel anything. It's basically like, hey there's a crow, wow, cool. Now what? It needs something to make it stand out. Have the picture make an impact on on its viewer, something that will make them go, hey it's a crow and WOW that's fucking awesome. See what I'm saying?
I'm not an artist. I make whatever I feel like making. Sometimes I make ART, sometimes I make RETARDED SHIT. So I really have no rights in saying this.
But eh, crows fly. They don't stand still.