A bit too white
I love white, and white on white drawings always have a soft spot with me, but this one is too light. The details aren't intricate enough to warrant the effort put into seeing the actual image. The shapes are too broad and large and make it difficult to really distinguish anything worth while. The paleness of the colors doesn't help either because they don't seem to make any actual sense. Even if they were saturated. I think working with more muted, not just lightened colors would lend itself better to an ephemeral piece. Good effort though trying something that most are afraid to do.
Thanks. I agree with all your points. A lot of this was just practicing new stuff, like you said doing stuff others might be afraid to do. I sacrificed some esthetics in sake of the techniques etc. Thanks for the thought out review!.
I think I see something. *leans to the side and looks at it from different angle*
Holy crap! It's Jason Voorhees! O.O
Actually its Big-jonny-13, but yeah it is the jason mask, glad you could make it out.
I can see what it is, but very faintly
Look hard; art isnt always supposed to be easy to look at;
Thanks for the review
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