its pretty good, but the eyes of that dead dude, dont look dead.
it looks like hes wide awake staring at the camera with blood all over himself.
the empty texture in his eyes is good for dead people
but u shouldn't make it look like hes staring at you, but rather maybe at the ceiling or straight up, like hes putting no effort in moving eyes....because hes dead
and you should change the way blood is on the walls, smudging the blood like u did is good, but u need to add variety, make some smudged hand prints with blood dripping, add some paintball-like splatters ya know?
anyway keep up the work, i look forward to see more of ur pieces