Great! You nailed the shading. The incorporation of the blurs at the ends of the image create this lens focus effect, which I personally really dig. I also really dig the coloring style which, avoids cell shading and goes for a more pastel-ish look to it. I love this anime and you, my friend, did it incredible justice. Keep creating art, can't wait to see your future works.
All his expressions so far seem very monotone. I love how the drink's coloring changes the picture, I actually haven't noticed his eyes before.
Thank you for your review.
He is a bit of monotone/unemotional at the first view.
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