really love the style you're going with, this is literally a page out of my life.
the only improvment i can recomend is going into alil more detail with the iconic emotions. like in the last image, the girl could have more of a blank cold stare, or in the 3rd image, the dude could have more detail such as eyes closer to the edge of his face.
but i love what you've done and only got minor improvment tips. i know that you didnt care about the background, which matches the rest of the artstyle. you knew what you were doing, and that alone is worth alot
Thank you for such nice review!
I will work on details! ^^
You are helpful.
dunno if it was you or someone else, but someone put this pic on 9gag.
on another note, love it! it just need colors now.
I didn't. Someone else, I think.
I like to keep my comics in black and white ^^
Thank you for your feedback.
And also, could you please note me a link with comics on 9gag?
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