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A Jump Into the Ocean

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I feel like there's something missing from this, but I don't know what it is. This has taken me a long ass time and I still don't think it's right.

Constructive criticism will be much appreciated.

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PURPLE!!!!!

Yes! Purple is awesome! and awesome because it's purple!

Very nice

I think it's complete.

Everything is very well defined. Colors couldn't have been selected more fittingly to be honest. Shading is also done quite well.

The anatomy is nearly perfect, but the arms bugged me a bit for some reason. Oh well.

I love the background as well.

5/5, 10/10, my seal of approval and confirmation it's better than my art.

Awesome!

I think you need to edit the arm! It is tugging at my mind. I don't know what's wrong with it. But all-in-all, awesome! Much better than anything I could draw.

Awesome.

I can see what you mean by something is missing, but I'm slightly torn. I agree with what you say, and you could add something to the background, but at the same time, I like the simplistic background, and adding something would ruin that.

The only reason you lose marks is for the hair. I don't like the way it completely covers the face and it goes in a different direction to what you would think. I think that if you were to fix that it may add that little something you're looking for.

InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Yeah, the hair has been irking me ever since I drew it, but I don't know how to fix it without completely redrawing the head and the hair.

The leg...?

It's great, but the right leg, It's bent in a funny way...

InsertFunnyUserName responds:

I assume you mean the leg on our right and not the character's right.

Yeah, I see what you mean.

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