Not bad at all. I'd love to see our focal point stand out more fron the background, however. She almost blends in, despite efforts to shadow her and highlight areas of difference. While I feel it's nicely done, the linework and particularly highlights are done in a spotty, jerky manner that takes away from the overall presentation. It's just not very clean. The eye almost looks like wet paint, and is hard to differentiate due to muddy highlights. Be more thorough here; don't make your viewer's eyes work harder to focus.

Overall, feels quite rushed, but not so much that I didn't like it. Keep at it.