I like this a lot, but the more I look at it the more I start to notice little things that are off. Her ribcage is kind of pear shaped, her hair parts way above the forehead, the tail doesn't connect in one curve behind her body, and her teeth don't match the angle of her face. On the other hand, shading is good, her breasts have a good sense of weight, and the composition is really good and conveys the story immediately.
You might want to watch some anatomy videos on the torso and hairline in particular, but overall it's really good! I want to see what happens next. :3
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