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Gen3515 LaserStar #1

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This is the first page of my test comic, This is a Dream sequence, that's why everything has that distorted and ethereal feel to it, including the dialog itself, a misinterpretation of chaos theory on a metaphysical point of view, by a religious fanatic/ cult leader.

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https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/immaboreddude/laserstar-page-2

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Thanks for linking it here in the other one, I think I missed this one before.

immaboreddude responds:

No problem; I hope this page can give more meaning to that existential nightmare.

Very cool first page -- the distorted city backdrop is confusing and intriguing at the same time. Feels like the beginning of a cyber-punk or maybe 'supernatural' theme for sure. Excellent use of warm colors too/blending with the blue-ish 'nigh-sky'. Love it so far ! Excellent work.

immaboreddude responds:

Thanks, I'm tryingmy best not to make the dialog too edgy, I mean, like yeah it is still edgy, but on an acceptable level. kind of hard to achieve when english isn't your first language.

I really love the flow and stage you've set. Very good hook, I'm excited to see the next page and intrigued about this world you're presenting.

immaboreddude responds:

Nice, thanks for following my comic, I'll keep uploading pages as soon as I'm done drawing them, If you have any criticism or opinions, feel free to share, it will help a lot on future pages.

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