The caricature is pretty cute, unfortunately that's all this piece has going for it. Your overuse of blur in the background and the extremely blatant sketchy outlines you gave the character make the piece look extremely hastily done and dull. Maybe if you put in more effort into the amount of detail you put into your pieces (instead of bs'ing your way, like how you just plastered a design onto the figures hair), like experimenting with shadows and shading, I have faith that you'd be able to do some pretty good work from there on out. Keep up the good work though and be sure to check out my art as well!
thanks for the advice and i'll check out your arts!
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