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Author Comments

This was done in December on my trip around the Caribbean. Have fun tearing it apart. :P


I am very disappointed in people's ignorant critism on this piece. Don't even understand why the score is so low. There is a bit of stuff here that's out of proporation, but besides that, this is honestly a beautiful piece. I love the detail you put into her eyes and hair, and even though this is just a sketch, I can see great potential in your work!

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Learn to draw

do you steal your art because its hard to believe your this bad.

Excellent detail and shading on the face.

But your problem isn't that one of her eyes is set too high... on the contrary, her right eye (seen on the left) is too low. It doesn't follow the traditional eyes-halfway-up-the-head anatomy, and doesn't line up well with the top of her ear.
Now I'm not incredibly good at facial anatomy, so I won't be able to offer much more critique than that, but you might also want to look at where the ruffles meet the shoulders and make the transition a little smoother (particularly on the left of the piece).
Hope that helps a little.
If you're having trouble seeing what I am, try covering up the eye in question and viewing the other half of the face, as the right (her left) looks much more natural to me.

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IloveNantes responds:

Hey, you're right! Thank you for the honest review. I feel a bit terrible now knowing that it turned out that the left eye wasn't too high, but that the other was too low. As an artist trying to get into the professional industry a few years from now, that's a bit disheartening.

But thank you again, I really appreciate it.

Listen, Hiryu.

All right. Look, asshole. This started out as constructive criticism and you obviously can't see your faults in your work. So, it went on the trolling. Well, you asked for it. I'm her boyfriend and I'm sick and tired of hearing your degrading comments on a woman's whose artwork has more talent than your trashy, skimpy women drawings that are obviously part of your odd perception on women. Now, from what I see, itâEUTMs realistic and has good captivating eyes. (Read this, it will greatly help you improve your art work, you prick.) Also her features actually give her an age and a sense of beauty. The anatomy is fairly well done and a sight better than your mismatched women who look like they been through deformities. Take for instance she also adds facial features that stand out. Point made, she draws realistic figured where you my no good jerking off dork, draw undignified women. Which, probably explains your lack of a social life.


Just terrible...It is just DOWNRIGHT horrendous...If I saw her walking down the street, I would run and hide because she's so ugly. Her face looks awkward, her neck is missing ( could you MISS that), and it's just so messy...Why do you even bother drawing? Why bother trolling? Does it make your e-peen larger than your 2 inches already is? Does the trolly need some e-peen? I think he does. Well, too bad, you ain't gettin' any. You've had one little victory and that's all you're getting.

IloveNantes responds:

The neck is there, you're apparently just too dense to see that it's covered by the ruffles. I know that the face is slightly awkward--one of her eyes is set too high. I noticed. Thanks for the review, but since it's coming from someone that mainly draws anatomically squashed-up anime chicks, it's invalidated.

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Credits & Info

2.14 / 5.00

May 13, 2011 | 3:52 PM EDT
File Info
766 x 1035 px
127.2 kb

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