Jesbus MC8


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Jesbus from the begining of madness combat 8.



This looks really cool, and even without colour it looks nice.

I really like the face over here. It looks so well done, with a lot of detail, and the beard looks really cool too. As Fro said, though, the ring on his head was a little roughly drawn, and the gun needs some more texture and detail to it, even though it looks really cool right now. I wish this had a cool background too :\.

I won't complain about this needing any colour, since it looks really awesome without anyway. The shading here is perfect as well, especially on the face, but on the gun it needs a little work.

In all, great job, when it comes to madness sketches, you're the best at it that I know. Actually, the best at any sketches from the Art Portal. Keep it up ;).

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Love The Gun

The gun and the face are both the strong points in this drawing. I think the body could have used a little more work, and it needs to be darker. Try editing after in photoshop, to make darker. If you were to add some color, I am sure they would look fantastic!


Love his face!

Awesome shading on his face and everything! But the hand on the magnum is way off. Otherwise, nice one! (again)

Voted 4 omg lol

Like I said before, nicely done.


The face looks very good. A lot of details are presented here. Too bad the rest of the picture can't compete with the face.

The gun for example looks very bland, which lets the picture down. Some more lines on the cylinder would already make this so much better. I suggest you take a look at various revolvers to see what I mean.

Also, a very large part of the canvas is plain white, which never looks too good. Some background (maybe some hills or some trees) would get rid of this problem.

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3.33 / 5.00

Jun 17, 2009
8:30 PM EDT
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1512 x 1098 px
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