Nice work here I think it's a good drawing but could use more depth to it and taking the into a digital form so you can really enhance it with effects and of course some color just something to think about but would be a good idea to go with
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Some color and effects enhancing
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I've seen better.
It's not bad. Some of the lines could be improved, and it desperately needs colour.
Another thing I would suggest is the use of a background, to make it more interesting.
It would be nice to make it digital. If you have Flash, Photoshop or GIMP you could simply import it and trace over it, then colour it. This would make it much better.
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Nice and clean
I think this could have done with some colouring even if it was just some darker shades for shading, it all helps. His clothes look quite strange especially to the lack of feet, the main factor about the actual clothes itself is that the middle bit sorta looks like a tie but I think it's the undershirt, and the thing on top of that is the jacket, just looks weird to me.
Really missing a backround! This would be great with a backround, even if it was just a city landscape and nothing interesting it would really make it seem much nicer.
Next time, spend more time making things clearer with colours.
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Not bad :)
A decent enough image of Hank, though I would certainly recommend that you get your hands on a tablet and start drawing these things digitally.
You could certainly use some work on the background and perhaps even a splash of colour - you could do so much with the shading, just using the pencil and adding the red of the goggles and the blood stains to Hank's clothing, making it appear more menacing.
I'd have centralised Hank more for the image and tried to make that the focus of the image, rather than adding a large signature. changing these things about slightly will certainly help in the long run
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