Nice and clean
I think this could have done with some colouring even if it was just some darker shades for shading, it all helps. His clothes look quite strange especially to the lack of feet, the main factor about the actual clothes itself is that the middle bit sorta looks like a tie but I think it's the undershirt, and the thing on top of that is the jacket, just looks weird to me.
Really missing a backround! This would be great with a backround, even if it was just a city landscape and nothing interesting it would really make it seem much nicer.
Next time, spend more time making things clearer with colours.
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