great job of course! but, also remember that the NG art portal is for finished pieces not sketches. just an FYI. it's kind of a box you check in when you submit the art "this is not a sketch please include it in the art portal"
I just say that because I got banned once from the art portal for my earlier submissions...
I didn't put this in the portal. I'll submit it when it's done. Thanks!
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