Falling Leafs

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Falling Leafs

Author Comments

This was my first drawing ever to be created with a tablet, it was very hard at the beginning but fortunately i get used to it.


My feelings, detailed or not detailed.

What I liked:
Grass was very nice. Even though it's not the focus point of art, I liked that you used multiple shades of green, like jade green over all but with light green and olive here and there and also in little patches, like grass is in real life.
Pattern on the dress was well done. That must've been fustrating, because if I did it I would've gone crosseye, because I'd need to check over and aver to see if the pattern was consistent and nothing is gettting too out of place.
The girl, because she is anatomically correct. Head's perfect size and arms aren't looking like orangutans, so on and so forth.
And the sun rays, really gives an positive attitude to the whole thing.

The leaves.....They're are too plain. I am looking at it full size, and have constintly looking at it to make sure my comments fall true. You did such a nice job on the grass, and then you give these leaves, where the only difference in color in a single leaf would be at the outermost edge. Whenever I look at a leaf, even a live one, it would have some yellow inside of it, or some really dark patches. Plus, if there's so many leaves blowing in the wind, some of them must be dying and the color really needs to stand out more.
And the skin, maybe just a preference (I am white), but the skin looks a bit too pale. It always bother me in cartoons and artwork when you have a girl who obviously likes to be outside in the sun, and she has paper white skin. Possibly a slight tint to it would be perfect for a situation like europe, because I know that up there the sun isn't so strong. But alot of time in the sun should equal some sort of color.
Hair......doesn't really matter but.......it's purple.......

Not trying to be mean, but you look like a really good artist and I want you to be fantastic. I think this is a really nice artwork and I would favorite this if it wasn't for you being unscouted. And I don't care about what the rules are about pleading to get scouted. If you don't put a post out saying that your not scouted, your going to have to wait a lot longer. Make it more subtle than just out right saying I want to be scouted though...
Goes with this saying, the squecky wheel gets the oil.
Plus......no one has reviewed for a year now and I think you deserved one.

I'm not buying a tablet because they are too damn expnsive, but what art program did you use on the other pictures? They were pretty good, but i didn't feel like giving a long ass review about them.

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Sep 5, 2009 | 12:12 PM EDT
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1024 x 722 px
1.4 mb

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