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So another Caroline drawing that was the result of Wednesday's live-stream. She gonna hurt peeps.
Caroline Soulfire (c) HowSplendid
It's quite a nice piece man, you've done a solid job. I feel that you've done well on your expression, it gives me a sense of who your character is, and helps give some life to your piece. Overall a decently done piece.
I feel that the shading is a tad simple, and might benefit from some softer blending; the shadows cut off too hard, which gives a kind of sharpness to your piece.
Furthermore, your light-source is a little all over the shop, it's at the same time as hitting the top of the hand, hitting the bottom of a foot. I think having a definitive lightsource would bring out this piece a lot more. Another thing that may benefit your piece is trying to allude to fur by shading the shadows in a hatch, rather than with erasing; so having small, closely placed dashes in a conforming direction.
This piece would also do well with a background to develop a bit more atmosphere. Though it already possesses personality with your facial expression and through the speech.
Thanks for the feedback. always appreciate it. I'll be sure to keep that in mind next time. I forgot to mention in the description that this was a quick digital drawing that I was working on. I decided not to fully refine it.
As for the fur shading, I only do that for the hair and tail.(didn't do it this time) and not for the rest of the body. I prefer not indicating my character's fur. it's a cartoon after all.
I'll take the backgrounds into consideration, but only add them as needed.
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Umm dude, it looks like a redrawn verion of the kick with a more miffed caroline still neat tho
you're right it is. I wanted to see if I could make it better than the other one. :)
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