Nice work she is cute
Body looks well done except for the lower shoulder and arm. Check a reference image.
The head doesn't quite fit. In adding an anime-ish head you ended up with too small of a neck that is slightly off placement. If you want the Japanese stylistic elements temper them with some of the naturalism you used on the body. Great job with the skin shading, but soften the edges of the highlights or the skin look a bit like latex. If you want a few marks can make the skin even more realistic. Lastly do a little more with the foreground cloth a solid block of color flattens the image and it loses the sense of depth.
Thank you for your input, you have helped me a lot.
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