FMNA Redo
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FMNA Redo

Author Comments

Redid a previous commission I wasn't too happy with the outcome of ;n;

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(ㅇㅅㅇ)Your replies are so sweet I can't handle it, in a good way. But enough about that*couch*

*please note that i'm no professional and am in no position to give any critique.
Great improvement, I can really see the extra effort that went into it. (not that I put both the old and the new one next to eachother (>.<')
In any case I also noticed that you went a bit more away from the warmer brown colors and went with a brighter one. I am slightly curious as to why? if you don't mind.
Along with the extra details on some of the petals and thorns whilst removing others, making for a more balanced right and left side. Especially the wings seem to have gotten some attention, where the previous one was slightly blurred this one is sharp. giving it some mass by accentuating the feathers of the wings with shadows more. Definitely looking better than the older version.
I'm sorry if my discription feels like it's not that great, I really think you have improved upon yourself.
sorry(๑•﹏•)⋆* ⁑⋆*
hope you don't mind.

p.s thank you for redoing the beltbuckle, the color diffrence really brings it out more :3
p.p.s don't be to harsh on yourself, your work is great. And you are still trying to improve that is where most people tend to give up. but you haven't so keep going and I'm sure you can become even better!
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holikrep responds:

QuQ I feel the same about yours~ you're always so kind and helpful! I appreciate you pointing things out that I might not have been able to see myself as well as hearing your preference/appreciation for some things I might have not even considered anything special ( if that makes sense YuY)
As for the brighter colors I couldn't actually tell you the specifics on why I chose them ;; It was just a preference of mine in the end result, hopefully one day i'll get to a point where I can choose between the two with an actual reason other than it was a personal preference quq
Thank you so much once again for the kind words and your insight QuQ)/ it's very helpful and it's definitely nice getting a better take on what other people see rather than just what I'm able to see

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Feb 18, 2017 | 3:49 AM EST
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