You gave this one a different style and I do with other artwork was as different as this one was, there is a sense of Stylization and Flair about this piece, I like it. Alright this was different for sure, the "EYES" really come out with emotion so nice job there and nice touch on the backround as well, maybe a tad more "SHADE" on the walls though. overall nice job here. But now we do come to the end of this review or close to it and before I get to any helpful options I just want to say it was something different and thats good when it comes to artwork.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So my take here on this submission is that you do have something decent here, and this was notbad at all, kind of reminds me of a car or house that you still need work on them from time to time to get all the kinks out here or there. maybe a tad more "SHADE" on the walls though. and I would also try and improve on the "FONT" it was hard to read maybe something more snazy and up front.