This is a funny submission. I liked the change in color at the end of the guy's arms, and I like the general creativity of the submission. What I didn't like about this submission was the background and lack of quality it brought to the submission. It seemed like one of those things that you just threw out there for the sake of putting on something nice, sort of like dress shoes at a semi formal party. The green monocle brings the one spark of color to the submission, that one difference and that's probably the best part of this submission in my eyes.
You forgot the part about COFFEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!
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