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The impending sadness

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my first attempt at a comic strip. Intentionally left white because it seemed more fitting.

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STEALER!!!

YOU'VE STEAL THAT FROM MONKEY AND COCONUT OF ROSS BOLLINGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Happy3kmed responds:

i don't know what that is, so i can assure you i didn't steal it.
don't you have something better to do?


Not bad for a first go.

I like this piece. It's simple, has a basic narrative, and a funny ending. Illustrations are simple but fitting. So you've basically ticked all the boxes to pass 'level 1'. So it's a perfect skeleton. Now all you gotta do is put some flesh on it. Just extend the level of illustrative detail, and extend the story detail and length, and you're already starting 'level 3.'

Keep up the good progress. =D


Happy3kmed responds:

thanks for the review, although i think the story is about as long and detailed as it's going to get, no plot development here...

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Happy3kmed
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Apr 3, 2010
12:29 PM EDT
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1909 x 2083 px
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