I miss the color! It's just an okay sketch to me.
I give you credit for trying, but it looks pretty clear you had a hard time here. Did you use pen? That's VERY difficult. Anyway,
The right arm is too thick, the shoulders are too wide, the eyes are unfocused, the chest isn't balance, and don't even SPEAK of his nipples. >_> Almost perfect!
Yes, I was lacking a lot of refinement in this picture, I also drew it with a Tachikawa G-Pen, so you are correct on that, it was very difficult
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