Colors look good, though the line-work feels a bit limiting. Sharp lines make for a bit stiff edges, especially on the hair, and they feel a bit uneven as well. For things like the collar, the seam between neck and clothing feels a bit unnatural too, following the same form like that. Good design overall, but could be more natural!
Understood, thank you for the feedback. ^_^
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