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GotN © Karine Coenen
:icondonotplz::iconusemya rtplz:

Miss you Rhine <3

"My Immortal"

I'm so tired of being here
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish that you would just leave
'Cause your presence still lingers here
And it won't leave me alone

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

[Chorus:]
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I held your hand through all of these years
But you still have
All of me

You used to captivate me
By your resonating light
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind
Your face it haunts
My once pleasant dreams
Your voice it chased away
All the sanity in me

These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just too real
There's just too much that time cannot erase

I've tried so hard to tell myself that you're gone
But though you're still with me
I've been alone all along

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Another cool piece

And once again here is another cool piece I like the visual from the frontal view the background was pretty decent on this one I do think adding some extra glow on the character outter shell and line work would be a positive changes on this one anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more glow as suggested

~X~

me like!

you got some good skills. is there any chance you can draw one with a background, like in a forest or something??? please? for me.lol

Awwww

I know how you feel, Me and my girlfriend probably won't see each other face to face for about 5-10 years.

So this really touches me.
Hope everything works out better for you!

Goddess-ofthe-Night responds:

Thanks for the comment dear *huggles*
mines I wont see for a life time... He passed away..

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Nov 25, 2010
10:40 AM EST
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