Fantastic piece! I really admire how you took other's criticisms and made the drawing even better; comparing this "newer" one to the "older" piece I can definitely tell you put some effort into making the water more water-like and less like cloth.
Again, great work!
Great athmosphere, color and light. I really dont know what I can critique there.
Only thing I noticed it, that to water looks a bit like cloth. But man, them rocks, ROCKS! I really like the texture and looseness. Probably rocks are my most favourite thing to paint :) Good job
You weren't alone with the opinion on the water so I decide to change it
hope you enjoy the new version.
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