I quite like the pose, it looks very hesitant.
really like the art style when you fix the unatural position and coler it i really wanna see it
the problem here is the pose, it just looks way too unatural, the waist area also looks weird cause like the body is looking on side and then the legs are going the other and like the waist dosent seem to like, move at all.
i really like the perspective on the face itself and again you got a pretty nice style o3o
hey thanks a lot for the critique man! very good points. i will try to be more careful on the next ones :)
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