Very awesome work. I actually like the cartoonishness (Not a real word) and how it contrasts with the rest of the piece. The only criticism I would give is that the lightning trail's angle seems a little off, as if he was raising the sword from a point farther away from himself than he could reach, unless of course he's intended to be running in which case I feel you could express that a little better. Just the opinions of a non-artist. I do really like this piece overall though.

Pretty good, though I just didn't like his face. I would imagine a satyr having squintier eyes. This seemed to cartoony to me. But everything else was well done

this is NARNIA!!!

Nice, most satyrs r underrated, simple and epic.
GJ!

I really like this sketch. The anatomy is pretty solid, and the weapon's lightning effect works well.

The only thing I'm not crazy about is the nose. I think I would like it more if the nose was more of a longer, pointed shape; similar to the ears. That being said, I can also appreciate that you went with a blockier nose, I just feel it takes the potential for a sinister appeal and turns the whole piece into more of a storybook or a Disney character. (Not that that's bad either.)