Really loving the character designs.
the minimal colors give it a unique look that I'm not sure if I like, but I definitely don't dislike.
The one small nitpicky thing that stood out to me is in the first panel.
I realize she's supposed to be clearing her throat, but the way her hand is positioned, it makes it look like she's shoving it down her throat instead.
Anyway, fantastic work! Really want to see more of this. ^_^
This is the 1st page I've seen so I have to say I love how these character's are drawn in this, and the frizzy hair and ripple effect are a really nice touch.
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