Now, instead of making an inappropriate and stupid comment, I'll just say good job. The color and art in general is great.
Comic Practice: Space Harpy
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Ahh so I finally started really buckling down when it comes to comic practice! I am obviously far from the 'good' level but its my dream to also be able to do comics and animate to some compacity along side my usual illustration work! I also want to do more with the OC's I've created so Space Harpy(from an old piece I uploaded last year) is my main focus at the moment!
I have to learn how to make good looking speech / thought bubbles as well as learning how to lay out comics in an attractive way and come up with stories but for my first time, I really love this!
I hope you guys will continue to support me when it comes to my artistic growth!~
frootcube responds:
Thanks! lol
Looks fantastic, which is something I've come to expect from you. The layout is easy to understand and flows well, and the art here is beautiful.
Honestly the most difficult thing I find with comics is two or three person conversation speech bubbles getting jostled around and reading them in the wrong order.
frootcube responds:
Omg thank you so much! You're so kind 😭😭💕💕!! Yeah like, the layout is something that I really love about it but as someone stated, I need to pay more attention to tangents/placement so I feel like if I can improve on those aspects, I'd be in a very good spot! ~ And I know that feel haha! Like, how do I read this!?
Awesome first (?) attempt! Already love the coloring!
As advice i'd say it could use a little bit more attention to tangents/ placements of objects and speech bubbles to make it more pleasant to read through!
Not entirely sure what happens in the last panel and why she says "oh my" haha xD
Great job and keep pumping out those pages, you'll get better and better as you go!
frootcube responds:
Ahh thank you thank you!! And yeah like, I didnt really know what to really write since I went in blind HAHA ! The "oh my" was in reference to the size of the planet in the last panel since shes closer to it but I guess it doesnt make much sense because the scale is badddd xD! Overall, I'm going to definitely keep what you said in mind and apply it! Thank you so much!~
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