Interesting character, good coloring, good basic shading. It's just kinda boring though, y'know? No real background, no action or real expression, he's just standing there staring in the distance. If he's a traveler, I'd suggest putting him on some sort of trail and making him point or seem like he's walking some place. Let his actions and expressions give him more character and let him seem more like traveler you want him to be. It'll be far more interesting to look at and definitely worth the extra work, at least in my opinion.
It's a very good start though.
Thank you very much for your feedback. I will do better next time :)
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