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I finally submitted my first submittion on NG, and my very first PSD is done! It's my second coloured art so I'm not so used to it yet. Still feel a little 'colour blind', but hope its not totally crappy. The quality fell a little since the original art was too big. ;-_- But at least I made it.
Actually its not my style, all this colour, music and fasion, or whatever you call it. But I were introduced to some kind of weird game called 'Vocaloid', and just felt to draw a style a like. I get easily inspirated by new things and styles. Any way, here it is. Enjoy.
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Really fun, and an explosively colourful! You've got some nice design work on your characters as well.
The problem is its very cluttered and disorganised. I get the impression the stuff in the background is thrown together; the wing and speaker look out of place.
There's not really much thought behind the colour, either. The girl is wearing reddish browns, yet the guy is white, yellow and blue. Coupled with the random colours in the background, everything just clashes against each other.
Keep up the good work, though.
Flying-pen responds:
Thank you too, and for the letter as well. I'll deffinetly keep going, even thought it'll take some time to get some new art done.
I'll keep your tips in mind. ^^
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Hey there, thanks for commenting on my drawing of Azusa! I'll do my best to help you out. Here we go...
GOOD POINTS:
- Poses are cute and lively.
- Characters have unique designs, even if you were directly influenced by Vocaloid.
- Crown and star motifs are generally well-placed, though I think an arch like this:
(_\ | /_) <--- would be better.
- Colors are bright and vivid to match the tone of the image.
THINGS TO IMPROVE:
- Lineart. Your lines are quite wobbly from up-close. Mine are, too--the trick is to draw it big, like you did, and scale it down to a more manageable size. The lines will clean themselves up.
- It's really hard to incorporate all the colors nicely. It can look mismatched. It's definitely NOT "crappy," though. Just try to limit your color palette and study the color wheel.
- Clutter. I really like the crown and stars, but the green circles and the wing in the background seem out-of-place. Be careful not to mistake clutter for detail.
Overall, this is very cute, fun piece. I definitely get an electric vibe. ^^ Please keep drawing and posting on NG! I'm no expert, but I'd be happy to continue helping you.
Flying-pen responds:
Thanks a bunch for the tips! And for the comment to. I've been fearing that I wouldn't be noticed anymore, so I kept on announcing in my comment, thought I think the FAQ said I shouldn't, so I feel bad for doing it. But frustrated as well, becouse nothing happens. :(
That's why keep advetising. But guys like you make my heart cheer up, when you comment tips this good. ^v^
GIRUGAMESH!!!
does the red head remind anyone else of that?. But seriously, it's a nice piece of work, hope to see full characters later on!
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Looks great! ...I never really know what to type in a review... :l
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