Heart squashed into pieces

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Heart squashed into pieces

Author Comments

I have recently gone through a break-up with a first girlfriend ever. I was seeing her since last year's autumn, but we stepped into relationship close by 2011 christmas. Actually, we were six weeks in relationship and broke up a month ago, but we were secretly together through all the february until her confused mind state did not tolerate being bound with me no more. I have hard time coping with it, because she was the first girl to truly love me back, had my first kiss with and all that, so I poured my feelings into a form of art.

Used coal pencil, coloured pencils, felt tips and A4 paper for this work. Enjoy ! : )


OK so this was abit differant from alot of stuff, so my take on it was i really liked it and like all the use of color, you really have it splash out in a very good way here so that was possitve, Thispiece also has some meaning with the words and the whole feeling it gives off of being crished by someone maybe, not sure but it does tell a lil story and that just makes it even better, now to make things better maybe you could darken up the heart more redish and more dripping below, but thats just me, for the most part of this this was pretty good, anyways keep up the awsome work.

More redish color could be used, and more dripping below.

Flashmovieboy responds:

Thanks a lot for such a detailed and constructive review ! I appreciate this :)

Before having a girlfriend, I thought that loneliness is the worst pain ever to exist in the world. But after a relationship with her, I learned that while loneliness is a pain comparable with being hit by a wooden plank. It hurts, but doesn't leave a scar. The pain of a break-up, however, is like getting spear of steel impaled through your heart. Not only does it hurt, but for a while, makes me unable to love anybody the way I loved my ex.
Thanks for the advice, although I wanted to avoid using too much red, I'll keep this on mind.

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3.79 / 5.00

Mar 10, 2012 | 11:17 PM EST
File Info
1007 x 715 px
1.4 mb

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