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I'll start by saying that I really like the way you did the wings. They're very intricate and the glow around them is a nice effect.
However, you have some proportional issues there.
The biggest one is that, when you look at people in real life, none of them are that skinny. There seems to be, for a lot of people including myself, a tendency to draw characters, particularly female characters, too thin.
Also, I suggest looking up some facial proportions tutorials. The angel's eyes in your picture are too high.
Another thing I suggest would be to put some wrinkles and folds into her dress to make it look more realistic. Right now it kind of looks like a tube. If the angel were a person in real life, you'd see all these folds and wrinkles where the fabric fell around her body.
There's potential here, but it needs some work.
I'm glad you think so
proportions have always been my downfall :/
Too skinny? hmm... you could be onto somehting there...
I thought the eyes were in the center of her head? D:
they doo look a but high now that u mention it...
I added the shading in the dress to try and make it look like folds rather than just straight... clearly that failed
Thanks for your review
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