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Apr 1, 2010 | 7:15 AM EDT
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Author Comments

As you can see, this is my FIRST NG IMAGE!
Anyway, im proud to present: NOTEBOOK ART!

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Little-RenaLittle-Rena

Rated 0.5 / 5 stars

Okay, lets review this...

BACKGROUND: I've not seen a notebook with this many holes unless it's a specilist notebook which might explain the very narrow gaps for the lines, generally though, they are a decent width for writting on.

CONCEPT: Dull, it's been done before and much better, I have seen notebook art that is better than this.

ART: What are the random splodges about? They really don't fit in with anything and I don't know what pencils you are using but mine don't come out grey with white dots in them. Had you done more random doodles rather than splodges, it might have looked better but the pencil doesn't look like it is drawing, it looks like part of the picture, add some shadows underneath objects.

IN GENERAL: Lazy work. REALLY lazy work. It seems like you wanted to be famous on Newgrounds so you did a flash with no effort. No effort = low vote.

1/10

Sorry if im being too rude, but its what this "thing" deserves.

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