This is amazing! Rhyth is my favorite character from Jet Set Radio Future, and I think you did a great job. :)
But the angle looks weird.
whys she stepping on peoples faces >->
Dude, I really like your other pics; they have a lot of detail and style. You're obviously very talented. This one is weird though, her chest going one way while her body goes the other (inertia? hahaha) and both of her arms are oddly bent. The coloring is fine, but there isn't enough contrast between the face and background. Anyway, I was thinking of making an illustration based on the boxart of JSRF; I could share it once I'm finished if you're interested.
I'm interested! Anything you have JSRF related I always want to see.
About your critique - Yeah, now that you mention it It does look kinda weird. When constructing her The lines made sense, I think what has happened is the shading of her dress has dropped a lot of the depth I originally drew. Thanks for pointing that out.
for some reason i knew this was jet set radio from the preview :D
anyway, nice perspective, everything looks awesome, my only critique i guess would be to give the wall a little shading or texture or something cause it looks kind of flat.
either way, i fav'd it :D
Thanks suwako, The light area on the left (I think you're referring to) is actually another image, this was lifted from a montage I did a while back, I just didn't want to go in and mask it out completely out of laziness.
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