Well, I'd say this is a nice start, I'm giving you such a low rating because if you really do want to succeed, then first of all, get rid shard edges, all the white bits and pixelated bits make this look scruffy, I recommend you getting a tablet, the minimum they cost is 30-50 pounds (in the UK), because i think you have the ability to do much better than this. This is just a unfinished piece of work.
Thanks dude, you make very good points. Your low rating it warranted. This was just a quick drawing, I definitely should have neatened it up for newgrounds.
Unfortunately I'm too broke to grab a tablet anytime soon, but thanks for your encouraging words and review.
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